These quick tips will help you find and correct some typical expression errors.
To edit your own writing most effectively:
- read your draft out loud OR
- carefully review a print-out with a pencil in hand (better yet, do both!).
1. “Sound-alikes” or confusables: spell checkers think all of these are correct
- it’s/its
- effect/affect
- accept/except
- everyday/every day
- awhile/a while
- altogether/all together
- anytime/any time
- principle/principal
. . . and others!
Find out more: Common Errors in English Usage
2. Pronoun misuses
- I/she/he/they” incorrectly used as the object of a verb or preposition
- Janice will divide the work between
she and Iher and me.” (use the object form after a preposition) - “Casey gave extra cookies to
they and Ithem and me.” (use the object form after a preposition) - “Mr Big invited Matthew and
Ime to the year-end bash.” (use the object form after a verb that takes an object)
- Janice will divide the work between
- Incorrect use of reflexive/intensive pronouns
- “You can telephone Ms Higgs or
myselfme at any time.” (again, use the object form after a verb that takes an object)
- “You can telephone Ms Higgs or
Find out more: Pronoun Case
3. Apostrophe misuses
- Use an apostrophe for contractions (it's = it is) and for possessives. It's also recommended after numerals, symbols, or single letters: e.g. “She received all A’s on her report card."
- Do not use an apostrophe to indicate a plural! That's the so-called “grocer’s apostrophe" error: e.g.“tomat
o’s99¢ a pound" or “potato'sON SALE!” Plural nouns ("tomatoes, potatoes") have no apostrophes.
Find out more: Apostrophes
4. Errors in subject-verb or noun-pronoun agreement
- “After a stock has had many months of strong performance,
theyit…” (the subject and the main verb are separated by a longer element) - “Careful consideration and research
isare important.” (compound subjects are plural) - “Each of our global funds has
theirits own manager.” (“each” is singular) - “Neither Matthew nor Janice
havehas the experience to do this.” (“neither” means one of the other, not both)
Find out more:
- Making Subjects and Verbs Agree (subject-verb)
- Rules for Finding and Fixing Pronoun Agreement Errors (noun-pronoun)
- Gendered Pronouns and Singular "They"
5. Sentence fragments and run-ons
- Don’t punctuate a phrase as if it were a complete sentence. A phrase functions as a noun, verb, adjective, or adverb.
- Don’t punctuate a dependent clause as if it were a complete sentence. Adding a subordinator (such as because, if, unless, while, since…) to a clause means it must be connected with the independent clause that comes before or after it.
- Avoid “run on” sentences (i.e. too many clauses/phrases, too little punctuation, too much use of “and”).
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6. Missing commas
You need a comma …
- After introductory sentence elements
- Before concluding phrases, especially “—ing”
- Before and/but/or/for/nor/yet/so when they join two independent clauses
- Before and after an adjective or adverbial element occurring in mid-sentence
- Between elements of a list (strictly speaking, this includes before the final “and”)
- Before (or on each side of) a non-restrictive “who” or “which”-clause
Find out more: Rules for Comma Usage
7. Unwanted commas (or—“where I’d take a breath”!).
Do not put a comma …
- Between the subject and the main verb
- Between the main verb and its object
- After the final adjective of a series
- Between only two elements (or two coordinated words/phrases) joined by “and”
- After an introductory “and” or “but”
- Before a restrictive “that”-clause
Find out more: Finding Commas in All the Wrong Places (“When Not to Use a Comma”)
8. Modifier misuses
- Misplaced: in the sentence, but in the wrong place (especially single adverbs like “only,” “almost,” “just”)
- Ambiguous: mid-sentence phrases that could modify elements before or after
- Dangling: introductory phrases that refer to the wrong noun or something not present in the sentence
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9. Mid-sentence structural “shifts”
- Change in verb tense (e.g. from past to present)
- Shift in point of view (e.g. from third-person to “you”-voice)
- Shift from singular to plural or vice-versa (but also see 4 above)
- Mixed construction: beginning with one type of phrase/clause and ending with another type that doesn’t logically align (e.g. “I found the price to be too expensive” – the item is expensive but the price would be high). This kind of error is also called faulty predication.
Find out more: Faulty Predication
10. Incorrect uses of other punctuation: semicolon, colon, end-punctuation, quotation marks, hyphen, or dash.
Find out more: Punctuation Overview